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PostSubject: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Mon May 18, 2009 5:45 pm

Me

at age two demons raided my house, my village, my life. none were spared,but me. For some reason the head demon, seemed more human more, living, than the rest. My parents had given me stories of heros in my head before their departure. These stories told tales of those who were powerful and against hatred. I was raised on such. at first they thought me a boy thinking that I would make a good warrior because that was what my parents said I was going to grow up to be. I don't remember much of this horrible day, but I do remember that my substitute father was not a pure gentle father and I would have nothing to help me through. all of this was crystal clear, or so I thought . . .


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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Mon May 18, 2009 5:46 pm

Life's Rough

"get up"
"make me"
"you know I will"
"so"
"now, before I get mad"
"I don't want to don't you understand?"
"No I apparently don't understand now get UP!
on this he lifted my mattress and I rolled on to the floor. "UHG!" still in my pajamas half a sleep with no intention of actually making contact I kick for his face. Without so much as a flinch he grabs my ankle and twisted it in a circle I flip my other led around to hit his head again. he grabs my other foot throws me in the air. I come down hands first towards his shoulders. Grabbing my hands he flips my right side up and hold me there, hands secured to my side. I go for a tuck and roll approach, but he had already seen that one coming there for he held my arms at my hips. I relaxed the fight was over and I was going to have to make my bed and get going.
after my stuff had been put back in order and all was neat in my room again I got dressed in workout clothing and headed to the kitchen for breakfast which was just down the stairs in this small house. "Why do you put up such a fight in the morning when you know your going to do what I say?" I rolled my eyes "because I do." "I see." he pondered that while cooking breakfast. I knew he didn't understand, he had never been around women, accept me and I hadn't been around women long enough to know what they were like. all I had was Tanner "daddy" and what ever apprentice that he had home that week, actually if they lasted that long, although some were good and would stay for a month. I was in constant training and I was learning to train others in fighting . majority of practice was based with weapons, but there were times when weapons couldn't help you or so tanner said. "So,Maxine . . ." "Oh god! don't use that name!" "its your name and ill use it if i want to." "Yeah but so is max and it sounds that much better." "fine, max I have an apprentice staying again seems to me he is going top stay a while so I decided that I could have two at once seeing as one is a little more advanced and you'd be better suited to be trained by you." "Me?" "who else is in this room?" "but why are you telling me?" "well so you are prepared to train or be trained by how advanced he is, is yet a mystery to me and I need you to put up that divider in you room and share it." I groaned but knew he would win so I finished breakfast quickly and went out side to train.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Mon May 18, 2009 5:46 pm

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My eyes glide over the glossy surface of the pond out back looking for the one to attack. My eyes lock. POUNCE! I caught the fish with my bare hand. I released it and decided that fish catching was getting to boring, and I needed something more stimulating. As I moved to stand I noticed a weight on my shoulder that i did not notice before. I automatically took the arm that was there and spun in a circle getting behind the person landing them on the ground. The person was prepared. they retaliated by pulling their feet under them and attempting to launch me off their back I was not so easily deceived I pulled on their hand and stood on their back stalk straight. this was not tanner he would have collapsed under this strain. I quickly flipped the person over on to their back hands underneath them and put my foot on their solid core. "Who are you and what do you seek?" OI said this as quickly as possible not trying to allow the to know anything about me beyond the fact that i was prepared. My warriors garb I was wearing gave most the impression I was a man and much more feared than if I was a woman. the man was not obviously ready to fight just happened to be lucky. he was filthy and strong, he may have been a foot taller than me but i couldn't tell since he was on the ground and I was asking the questions. "I am Cristian, and you are?" "Why are you here?" "tough egg to crack , ok then I can play that game too." We both sat in silence for a while while to used my wonderful voice throwing skills to get Tanner's attention.
Tanner came out slowly cane for emphasis, he didn't need it but he always had it in public and used it as a weapon when needed. "Young man who are you?" he looked directly at Cristian and he looked at me. I started "He came up behind me and . .." Tanner cut me off, he had done it before and I expected it now. "I asked the young man, sir, Max let him up." I did as I was told and realized that I was right in figuring a foot taller than me. Cristian seeming to realize this too said "Ah it is but a tyke, mighty strong you are." he would have ruffled my hair if it weren't for the helm. I took his hand and flung him over my shoulder and carried his as a potato sack to a place less visible to the street. he didn't resist instead talked to Tanner over my shoulder. "I'm Cristian, Cris for short, pleasure to met you Master Tanner." I rolled my eyes and was glad that no one could see. "here is good Max." i stopped in a clearing in the field. "So Max huh? how old are you kid?" I decided that this would be a good time to stop the illusion.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Mon May 18, 2009 5:48 pm

Woman's Work

I took off my helm. My hair rolled out to my thigh, long black. I flashed a warning look with my green eyes. "I'm 26 in three days thank you very much." His jaw dropped. Tanner started to talk "Go take a shower you have trained enough I will talk with Cris, is it?, then you can come back and show him where he will be sleeping." Tanners expression unchanged Cris bowed me out "Oh get up as long as your I this house you and me are equal got it!" I stormed off "A bit of temper on this one isn't there?" "Yes but she has a reason and a talent . . ."
I quickly washed up and changed in to something more conferable. I quickly pulled up my hair in a large knot at the back of my neck and set to work setting out my bedroom to accommodate for this . . Cris . . . I sighed as I got moving stuff around and apparently someone heard. "Need some help?" "No, thank you." I said in the most polite voice I could, realizing the circumstances it wasn't that polite. "Well then., I'll watch you work." You will not I snapped around and hadn't noticed how close he had gotten, I was almost face to face "H-how do you do that?" "what this?" he moved across the floor again without making any noise and considering the age of the house and the weight he must be that was practically impossibly, but apparently not totally. "Yeah , I . . ." "Astonished and speechless I know." he gestured to himself a if he were the center of the universe again. I turned around and in my fury I hastened my efforts moving things with more speed and vigor then I would have normally. "Your very beautiful, you know that." he did that out of thin air thing again. I almost dropped my vanity. I set down the vanity and turned around and yelled at him "DON'T FUCKING SCARE ME LIKE THAT!" I seethed on the spot. "let me finish this why don't you help your father down stairs with the cooking." this time I was ready to knock the ta out of him. "I AM NOT FUCKING CHINA DOLL! I CAN DO THE WORK MY SELF! WHY DON'T YOU HELP HIM! AND BY THE WAY HE IS NOT MY FUCKING FATHER!" i was so pissed I knew I would put a hole through the wall if i didn't leave.
I took a sword and a dummy and sliced it to shreds then I decide that if i got another one I could beat the tar out of it, or in this case the stuffing.i did this felt better and went back in side after cleaning up. Tanner and Cris were waiting at the table knowing that I would come in soon. I sat at my spot at the table and listened to the blessing of the meal then ate with out thinking or listening, Tanner had someone to talk to I didn't have to participate in the conversation.while I wolfed down my food , noticing day light still out I went out to work on the garden, I thought I had heard something mumbled like "Finally doing something feminine" but I ignored it and grabbed some gloves to pull weeds.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Sat May 30, 2009 11:33 am

Keep writing! this story is great!
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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Sat May 30, 2009 11:46 am

I'm too lazy to read it
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PostSubject: Re: Fire (doesnt have a real name, this is a good spot holder)   Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:36 pm

Sanctuary

I went out just beyond the pond to a large circular patch. it was 12 feet in diameter with raised flowerbeds from the edge to two feet in , accept for my 1 and a half foot entry way. I had formed this around a tree that was fairly old not big enough to fill up my space in the center, but was able to hide a small stone bench behind it . I had lay small stones around the tree, between there and the bed. in this place I felt totally safe, but I was still on my guard against anyone and every one, so I practiced some charms Tanner had taught me, one to sound proof so I couldn't here in or any one could hear out. I put up another one so that no one should see me but my self and my flowers. I hacked at the weeds and found It calming. everything was the same perfect balance under this tree, I lost all track of time.
i felt a pressure on my charms, not a forcing entry kind of charm but a kind of knock. At first I thought in my daze I had let my charm slip larger, but it hadn't and so I decided tat it had to be tanner or Cris neither of which i wanted to talk to , but I would have to any way. I slipped on to me bench and pretended that i was meditating. I let it go and my entire garden had appeared. There was a sharp intake of breath, then what i thought should be feet scrambling to find steadiness, but i could not hear the footing. "Cris I'm behind the tree, what do you want?" He moved in his silent way around my sanctuary until he was in front of me. "I wanted to apologize" I saw his face was sincere but I could not comprehend his bipolar disorder. "Did tanner tell you to tell me this?" "Well, yeah he did . ." "Thought so " "No let me finish, he did tell me to but I want to say I'm sorry too because I was rude.i hadn't realized what i had said was offensive." I rolled my eyes, then he offered his arm as a real gentleman. "No thank you, I escort my self." I ran like a speeding bullet for my room almost racing him and his silent footsteps like I was in 3rd grade. He beat me to the front door and held it open for me I sped through and went more slowly up the stairs. somehow he had gotten around me again and held open my bedroom door. I like I was a 4 year old stole the door knob from his hands, shut the door, and reopened it , not once taking my eyes off his reaction. I stepped in my room and saw a perfectly clean and divided room fit for the both of us, it seemed more roomy some how but I didn't know seeing as it was a crowded room to begin with.
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