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PostSubject: I has a story~!   Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:11 pm

I will post about the story line later, right now I'm just trying to remember what sections to post. Plus I'm making some edits to it.
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:28 am

Of course you should! :D

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Wed Aug 27, 2008 12:41 pm

You should! I'm stuck im a rut an anyways who cares if you write a story when i am~
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:26 am

Okayz~! So here goes the story line.... Oh~! I don't have a title yet, maybe you girls can help me with that.

Sora is a fallen angel with something dark growing inside of her, but she has no idea. She just thinks she's part of a world where battles between countries are constantly being fought. Her country is the Vorpal country, a pretty powerful nation among the five that still exist. Her friend Diao and a boy named Katsuya are always looking out for her, even if she doesn't like it. Diao and Katsuya are only two of the guardians that were sent by the rulers of Sora's angelic past. While the dark figure inside of Sora is awakening, many battles are being fought between the nations, and among Vorpal citizens. Sora can't seem to keep her anger down, and Katsuya is too afraid of revealing one of the many dark secrets about Sora's past; includng the one about what is growing inside of her. Visits from trapped spirits are always coming to Katsuya and he can't contain himself. They need to save Sora, but will they be in time to do it? I guess you'll have to find out won't you? :D

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:32 am

Yesh, it does! :o

Okosu no watashi no kuroi oni. The awakening of my dark demon. (起こすの私の黒い鬼)
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Okosu no watashi no kuroi tamashii. The awakening of my dark spirit. (起こすの私の黒い魂)

Those are my title suggestions. :3

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Thu Aug 28, 2008 12:33 am

Ooh~! I like it~!
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Thu Sep 04, 2008 9:09 pm

The dew on Sora's katana quickly evaporated as she ignited the flames across the blade. The harsh northern winds didn't bother her as she sliced through the air with ease. A battle against the Earth Village was tomorrow and she had to get as much practice in as possible. The Vorpal Village may not have been the strongest among the few that remain, but the were the most consistent; which made an easy victory for them. The only two villages that worried Vorpal Village were Wind Village and Aqua Village. Both were large and powerful, and they were always recruiting new warriors.
Sora thought about her strategies more as she practiced more with a blade. Suddenly she stopped when she heard a voice from behind her.
"Nice moves," a 17 year boy said. His orange hair and long grey coat slightly swayed in the breeze. A dark bow on his back moved as he took steps closer to Sora.
"Why can't you say 'hello' like a normal person?" Sora snapped. The boy chuckled and ruffled his falcon wings.
"How do you expect to fight tomorrow if you get startled by a simple greeting?" he asked with a smile.
"Some greeting..." she mumbled.
"Speaking of which, I haven't gotten a greeting from you yet. Why don't I help you out? You're supposed to say 'hello Katsuya, how are you?'"
She stared at him, obviously not amused. He stood smiling there until she spoke.
"Hey Katsuya..."she grumbled. He beamed.
"There you go!"
"Now go away, you had your greeting," she turned away so she could proceed with her practice.
"Ouch. Well I guess I'll leave you and your PMS alone," he spread his wings and began to lift himself upwards.
Sora's face redden with anger," Excuse me?!"
"Sorry can't talk to girls who have 'cooties,'" he winked and flew off.
There was a rustle from the bushes and a girls about Sora's age popped out of the bushes.
"Someone's got the hots for you!" she squealed happily. Sora's face turned red again. this time from embarrassment.
"No you're completely wrong!"
"Oh, so is it the other way around?"
"Diao cut it out! This isn't funny!"
"Oh I know why he was like that..." Diao smiled.
"What are you talking about?"
"Well that tear in your dress is kinda..."
"What tear??" Sora studied herself and found a large tear across her stomach area in her emerald dress. Her eyes widened, going through in her head about what Katsuya could've been thinking when he saw it. Sora stared at Diao's deep set green eyes and shrieked.
"This is embarrassing!!!"
"No it's not..."
"Easy for you to say! Not everyone is a natural beauty like you! You've got a perfectly proportion figure, and rich skin tone, and sleek black hair! And compared to you, I'm just plain! I probably look like a skank with this tear! This is terrible!"
"It's not that bad, I enjoyed it," a familiar voice called. The voice chuckled and Sora froze. She knew exactly who that was.
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:31 pm

Very good. I don't think I need to prof read it at all. :3

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:53 pm

"Katsuya..."Sora said under her breath. She was infuriated,"THERE'S A THING CALLED PRIVACY!!!!"
"Don't be embarrassed, I won't tell anyone," he replied with a chuckle,"Oh, and that's a pretty good look for you."
"T-that's not-!" It's not supposed to-!....Quit looking at it!!" she defended.
He laughed at her response," Yeah, yeah, I know it's there on purpose. You teared it during practice when you turned around too fast with the blade in your hand."
Her eyes widened,"You knew about this?! And you never told me?!?!"
He grinned,"I really don't think that's a question. Anyways, I thought you knew about it to begin with."
Sora looked to the side,"If I knew I probably would've gone to go change my clothes."
Katsuya thought for a moment,"That couldn't mean 0one of two things..."
"What are you talking about?" she asked sourly.
He smiled again,"It means you honestly didn't know, or...."
"Or...?" she repeated impatiently.
"Or it means you really wanted to talk to me," he said in an overly happy voice.
Her eyes transitioned from anger, to a lethal glare,"Stop talking to me and get out of my life..."
Katsuya was shocked by her threat and took a few steps backwards,"A little defensive are we?" he asked nervously.
A growl slipped from between Sora's teeth and she reached for her katana.
"Sora don't!" Diao jumped out and grasped the blade of the sword with a gloved hand.
She growled again and ignited the flames.
"Gah!" Diao gasped and she jumped back.
"Final warning," Sora snarled, this time jerking the blade towards Katsuya.
"Get out of here Katsuya! She'll just regret it if she kills you!" Diao shouted.
He gave her a shocked face and looked back at Sora's lethal stare. He nodded sadly, and he spread his wings. Soon he was high above the ground, and just barely out of Sora's reach.
"I hope we can meet again, on better terms..." He flew off and Sora glared at his flying silhouette until it disappeared.
"Sora? Are you alright?" Diao asked.
She nodded,"Yeah...I guess so..."
"Ah!" Diao cried out and she cringed as she touched her blister.
Sora turned to face Diao,"Diao! Your hand! Are you okay?!" she asked frantically.
"Yeah, un- huh."
Sora paused,"Did I...Did I do that?"
"Umm...yeah."
"It happened again didn't it?" Sora asked.
Diao nodded,"She's awakening..."

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Wed Sep 10, 2008 9:43 pm

Ooh~!

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:59 pm

"You ready for the battle?" a girl about Sora's age asked.
Sora flexed her fingers,"I think so, Zhu."
"You're not nervous are you? We're fighting the weakest forces ever," she said with a mocking tone.
"I'm not nervous alright? I have a lot on my mind right now," she grumbled.
"Sure whatever...." she replied sarcastically. Sora snapped and a growl came from deep inside her throat. Zhu stared and gawked,"Oh wow, you're sooo scary."
Sora ripped her katana from its case and placed it on the side of Zhu's neck,"Shut up you whiney b!tch!" Sora yelled, and tightened her grip on the handle.
"Sora! Please stop! The fight is against the Rock village!" Diao yelled from the edge of the crowd of people that were surrounding the two girls.
Sora's breathing slowed, and her mind became hers again. She then realized that the entire army was staring at her. Sora's eyes widen and she took quick small breaths. With her body glued to the spot she was standing in, she scanned the crowd. Every new pair of eyes that she saw scared her even more. Then, in the corner of her eye, she saw him pushing his way through the ghoard of people.
"Outta' my way. Excuse me. Comin' through," Katasuya said as he made his way to the front of the crowd. He saw her standing paralyzed in shock and stepped towards her. Her eyes got even bigger. Her could smell her fear, and he enveloped her in his wings.
"Sora?," he mumbled to her,"Are you going to be okay?"
She tried to speak, but no words left her mouth.
"You're still in shock I guess," he murmured,"Fine, I guess I have no other option. You'll have to skip the battle."
She wanted to protest, but she still remained speechless. She was soon taken by surprised when, in one swift motion, she was on Katsuya's back. He grunted under the extra weight, but soon he balanced himself and Sora so that he could take off.
"You didn't see anything..."Katsuya said mysteriously to the crowd. He winked at Diao and he flew off with Sora in tow.
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:04 pm

Anger issues. XD

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:21 pm

After an hour of flying Sora finally spoke,"T-thank you Katsuya..."
He smiled and decided to land in a open field. He grunted as his feel hit the ground with the extra weight. In a swift movement he picked Sora up and set her on a tall boulder to rest. Katsuya grabbed his canteen of water and held it out to Sora.
"Drink some water, you must be tired."
She took the canteen and drank a small amount of water.
"So do you think you're in a good enough condition to explain to me what happened back there?" Katsuya asked.
She shook her head,"I don't know much about it, but I know Diao does. She rarely mentions it, but normally it just sounds like something out of a fiction novel."
Katsuya turned his back to her,"Then I guess I'll have to tell you.."
"So you know too? Does this mean that it's actually true?"
He sat on a boulder across from her,"Yeah, I know about. And yeah, it's true. It's the only reason why..I know you."
She stared at him,"But I thought we-"
"Grew up with eachother? Yeah we did. A long time ago."
"H-how long ago?" She asked nervously.
He swallowed,"Sixteen hundred years ago..."
"Sixteen hundred?! That's not possible! I'm only sixteen years old!"
"No, you're not. Your memory right now is sixteen. Your existence however, is at least sixteen hundred years old."
"But-!!"
"Look, maybe now isn't the best time to explain this to you..."
"But I told you! I'm not-!!!"
Katsuya ignored her and reached for his bow. He held it horizontally in front of him so that it was parallel to the ground,"Later you will know about the real you."
"What are you doing?"
"I'm sorry," he closed his eyes for a moment, then opened them again. The blood red gem in the center of his bow began to glow and Sora's eyes drooped; soon, she was fast asleep.
"This never happened..."he whispered into her, and he picked her up and began to fly towards the village again.
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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: I has a story~!   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:38 am

When she awoke, Sora found herself in her bed. She lept off the bed, and noticed that she was wearing her battle uniform,"Gah! No! I overslept! How could I have forgotten that there was a battle yesterday?! Crap the general is going to kill me!" She hurriedly changed into more casual clothes, and pinned up her hair,"I've got to explain this right away, or I'll lose my postion!"
Just then there was a knock at the door,"Sora? You awake?" A friendly voice called.
"Yeah, Come in Diao, it's unlocked," she said with a pin between her teeth.
Diao skipped happily into the room, but skidded to a halt when she saw Sora,"You're not seriuosly weraing htat are you?"
"Huh? What are you talking about? Why are you all formal?" Sora asked, confused.
"We won the battle yesterday~" she said happily,"So there's going to be a festival tonight! And you are not wearing that."
Sora gave up on her hair, and set her pins down,"I can't. I have to talk to the general about how I overslept yesterday. I slept through the whole thing!"
"Oh that? Katsuya took care of that," she said carelessly.
"What do you mean by that? Katsuya of all people?" Sora's mind was reeling.
"Yeah, the guy isn't a total asshole you know."
Sora sighed,"If you say so."
Diao shook her head, before remembering Sora's outfit. She grabbed her wrist,"We're getting you a dress now okay?"
"I have one..."Sora pointed out.
"I know, and it's really boring because you wear it all the time. I'm buying you a dress."
Sora stared at her,"I can't accept this, especially since I shouldn't be going to the festival tonight."
Diao stuck her tongue out,"Yoo bad, I'm getting you one!" and she yanked Sora out the door and into the dress store.


Katsuya sat upright on his bed, and ran his fingers through his hair. He stared at the drawing he, Diao, and Sora had made when they were kids and sighed.
When he finally got off his bed, he threw on some clothes, and decided to visit his favorite thinking spot. His feet led him up a hill and under a lone Maple tree.
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